Monday, November 12, 2012

And One More Thing...

Here is the first bit of the chapters I've been asked to write for a charity novel, whom my friend, Daz, is setting up. I don't expect ya'll to necessarily understand all of the context, as these chapters come into play late in the game, but all the same, thought ya'll might appreciate some posts. Again, any and all feedback is appreciated!


Journal Entry #__
                As I write, I take a gasp of fresh air in. Why does the world seem… lighter?
                For the longest time, I’ve felt my problems crashing into me again and again, and I’ve half expected one of them to be the death of me. But, at last, I’ve met someone who understands me, sees me for who I am. Lucy… writing her very name gives me a feeling of warmth. Is this… hope, perhaps? … I don’t know if I’ve ever felt this before. When I feel lonely or unsure, I sometimes hear her voice calling out to me repeatedly. It’s comforting in moments of coldness and fear.
                I’m thinking of clipping my nails. A big step, I know. But I’m hesitant because they feel so… me. So natural. I dunno. Maybe this is me growing into a different me. Or maybe I’m just being stupid. These nails have always been here to protect me, things I could rely on. Never would they betray me, yell in my face, throw me against a wall. But do I need them, now that I have a real friend? … I’m not sure yet.
                This may be the last entry for a while. These moments for writing have gotten me through much, but I don’t want to have to rely on them. And I can’t think of a better time than now to test this theory. Hopefully, the rest of these pages can remain blank while my words feel free to be spoken and fill my life. What I feel for Lucy can’t be contained by just this book and longer. I think I’ll tell her just how I feel about us next time I see her. I would talk to someone else about it first, and make sure I’m doing the right thing, but who else is there for me to talk to?
She’s all I need now. Not my family, not all the assholes as school, not this stupid journal.
Just her.


Officer Victor Bowers had been walking this beat for seventeen years, too long if you asked him, and he was tired. No, not that kind of tired that you feel when you wake early in the morning, hours before you should, only to lie in bed for what feels like days, staring at the ceiling without a thought in your head until you’re finally forced to drag yourself from the soft cushions that had caressed your aching body and had kept you warm through the cold and heartless night to drive to your cold and heartless job to sit for hours on end without a thought in your head or a soft pillow to snuggle with. This is the kind of tired that comes from doing this every day for seventeen year, from the pain of watching partners come and go, watching victims live and die, criminals shout and laugh, and days pass by but never truly feel different.
Victor had seen himself wither in the mirror, the result of a thankless job in a thankless world full of the dead that narrate the lives of the living. That’s how Victor had comes to see it anyway; a poor shmuck or another would get shot in the back or stabbed in the throat or jammed into the trunk of a car that was sent thundering off the edge of a cliff, and he would find himself following the bloody bread crumbs left behind, like a twisted game of marco polo, except there would only be one scream and Victor would never hear it.
And he would find that this night would be no different.
Victor’s feet felt the familiar rhythmic beat of his sullen shoes, if they could even be called that anymore, slapping against the path that had been paved and repaved every four years, yet would always feel just as harsh and gruff, a retired war veteran sitting uncomfortably at attention in the uniform of just another civilian, giving everyone around him intense and awkward stares, unsure of how he was to interact with a world he could no longer understand, no longer connect to, as if his travels made him a different nationality altogether, belonging now to No Man’s Land, where Shell Shock and Strife held the positions of power, where Poison Gas whispered secrets into the ears of the unsuspecting, and where the only export was stories of sorrow, often swapped between the dead as they made their ways to their respective lives after life.
The officer felt sympathy for the stony geezer, knowing what it was like to be trod on by every person that would enter his life. From his frigid ex-wife, stealing his emotions out from under the sheets and leaving him with the child she never wanted, to Chief Arnold Suttmann, better known to Victor and his co-workers as Arnold “Soot-Hands”, breathing down his neck to catch the criminals that the Chief was suspected to have created in the first place. Even his son, Thomas, saw his father as nothing more than a means of getting out of this godforsaken town one day. At the thought, Victor’s eyes trailed up to the sky, as he wondered if The Big Man even bothered to look in the direction of his rundown town anymore.
A blotchy hand, covered in freckles and thin, white hair, brushed the sweat from his old and withered brow, his eyes having enough trouble seeing through his cheap glasses without having droplets running across the lenses like slugs, leaving a think and unsightly residue behind. Victor pulled the optics from his face, his aging eyes blinking rapidly in the twilight as he cleaned the glass on the front of his pristine, yet ill-fitting, uniform, much too big for him, making him look like a child playing at being a man. As he returned the glasses to his hooked nose, his blue opals magnified in the newly cleaned clarity. He stretched his knobby knees, thankful for the brief respite from the strenuous strides he knew by heart. Running his hands through his bristly hair, a tall, grey broom of a buzz cut, he sneezed, flecks of snot and saliva getting caught in his modest mustache that reached out to touch the corners of his face but could not even graze the tips of his lips, a thin line drawn neatly at the middle of his face, his frown wrapping around a small and simple chin.
Recovering himself, Victor reluctantly strode on, his muscles moving and flexing with every motion, a rippling tide just beneath his sea blue shirt. For though he grew older, Victor would never allow himself to let go of the body he built for dark and troubled nights such as these; how could he expect himself to be a proper cop with the physique of a twig? Exercise had become a part of his daily routine, something that he would not only set aside time for but do every spare chance he got, whether it be on the subway or in a doctor’s waiting room.
Civilians made room for Victor, knowing him on sight, not because of his uniform, but rather his face. He was respected in this neck of the woods, a grey angel that flitted about amongst the blue devils whom called themselves his brothers. People knew to come to him when the going got tough so it would be the injustice and villainy that was sent packing rather than the frightened novices, freshly picked from a neighboring town without an inkling of an idea of what a hard day’s work is, babied by their simple desk jobs, the nurses of an infantile incoming crowd of so-called “five-oh”, taking cues from fantasies flashing in front of their faces rather than the rough reality, to ragged for their minds to wrap around. Victor feared a future quickly approaching when children are handed guns and sent frolicking through the streets to play their foolish games of cowboys and idiots, except everyone’s on the latter team, though they may try and convince themselves otherwise.
The fresh smell of hotdogs, a combination of undercooked meat and scorched grease, filled his nostrils as he passed the mom and pop stand. Though he never bought the slimy excuse for a meal, Travis tossed whatever change he had in his pocket into the tip jar every time he walked by. February twenty third. The date was forever imprinted in his memory. The ear piercing screams, the ice shattering sobs, and the stark contrast between the white snow and red blood. This family had been through enough because of him; this eternal burden on his back made him feel that a debt needed to be paid, but never truly could be.
Victor felt a chill creep into his shirt like a lost puppy that has returned to its master a savage beast of the wilderness. This villainous creature had been making daily visits for the last three years or so, reminding him of his growing frailty, a fact that he would fight against with every fiber in his body. Yet how was he to battle an invisible and natural foe that grew within? He hated himself for his weakness, a vat of anger boiling in his stomach, clashing against his cold skin. But this chill was something more than what he usually felt filling his old bones; it was the frigidness of sullen alertness, sad alarm, a solemn knowledge. Victor shook himself, as if trying to throw the feeling off his back, a weighty leech sucking at his strength for dear life, teeth desperately plunged into his back, a violent sedative. A scowl crossed his faced as the cold refused to let go, matching the street’s cross stare as Victor strode briskly across it to reach the path of the adjacent side.
Looking up from his frustrated predicament, the officer noticed a young boy staring at the hardship written all over Victor’s face, a depressing article with a sorrowful black and white picture to go along with it, as they walked past one another. Victor didn’t take much notice of him, as he had his own boy at home to look forward to seeing and felt no need to observe every civilian that passed. Yet, despite his indifference, something strange caught his eye, something he had not seen in all his days working in the tired town. Hope, personified in a crooked grin sloppily spread over the youth’s face.
A few steps later, that smile was wiped from the world with a blood stained Sedan screaming to a halt, crying out for the boy that no longer could.
And like that, Victor’s senses were alert, his heart steaming hot, pumping molten energy, pushing an old body back to its former youth, yanking time backwards and wrestling it, holding it in a bear hug, if only for a brief moment so as to allow the body to remember a long lost past that should no longer be possible, yet rears its head, groggy from a sleep that was never supposed to end. His eyes were search lights, shining out of his head as he swiftly spun himself around to assess the situation.
Nothing could have prepared him for such a sight. He stumbled a little; Victor reassured himself that this was not his faltering body at work, but rather the shock of such a dismal view making him feel like that car had hit him, sending him careening to his hands and knees, mind fading to nothing more than a distant siren, calling out in desperation, a car frightened that its driver has suddenly disappeared from the front seat, screeching in hopes that he may find his way back to the wheel. Red droplets of life dripped rhythmically form the bumper hovering over the boy’s head, making him look like he had a twisted case of chicken pox. Victor looked up to see the shocked face of a sixteen year old boy, his face pocked and pimply, filled with horror and self-doubt, seeing what he had done, knowing in his heart that there was no taking it back. But he would try to back his way out of the situation, putting his car in reverse, revving the gas as quickly as he could without getting more blood on his hands. Victor acted without hesitation, shooting the three tires that were in his sigh. He was rewarded with the crack of his pistol, the backlash of each shot, and a satisfying pop only moments later. The vehicle cried out with each shot, feeling its legs being cut out from under him, leaving him to hobble to a pitiful sounding stop only a few feet from where it was previously, whining softly as it slumped into place, red tears running from the headlights.
Satisfied, Victor slipped his gun into his holster, moving towards the perpetrator, fury shining in his eyes, but not mimicked in his steps, his actions calm and practiced, a dance he had partaken in many a time before, although most of his partners fell before it was over, leaving him to waltz through the motions alone. This boy was going nowhere, quite the example of a deer caught in headlights, his body shuddering in his self-made prison, penned in by the onlookers around him and the fear within, chaining him to his crime.
And yet, the rest of the world looking in seemed nonplussed, as if this was just… what happens, as if this was okay by any stretch of the imagination. Most just kept walking, averting eyes and pretending to hear the birds chirping as always. Other, crueler folk were cracking jokes, studying the collapsed child, yet making no moves to get help, an action of kindness that was far beneath them, having already given up this life for lost.
Suddenly, a car started honking at the limp body as if to say “Get out of the way!”, expecting this ragdoll to somehow become animate again and stride away, completely fine and full of vigor. Closer and closer the impatient car drew, closing an already considerably small gap between the sorry arm and strong rubber that threatened to crush its opposition, not deterred by the putrid implications its actions suggested.
A rage overtook Victor for just a moment, but that’s all he needed. With a burst of speed, the elderly man charged headlong out into the street, spreading his legs over the silent victim like a ribbon holding the shattered remains together, hoping to piece back the broken bits into something resembling a someone. His lungs inflated with a passion, expanding into his throat, clogging up his insides with emotion, only to let it all out in a single burst, shouting at the driver, “Get your goddamned bumper out of this boy’s ass!!!” The woman, in her mid-forties, stopped all she was doing, stunned by the officer’s sudden appearance. Slowing the car to a stop, she raised her hands in the air as if she was under arrest, a look of pure terror and utter bewilderment plastered on her face like a crooked ad someone plastered along the walls of just another rundown building, tattered and worn from the weathered day. Sighing to himself out of frustration and relief, Victor returned to his slowed gait, making his way over to the front seat. When all the woman did was stare out at him out of confusion and fear, the officer tapped on the window, gently but with an authority to it that reflected his anger.
As the clear drawbridge that separated the pair began to lower, Victor’s mind went into a mode all its own, as if a switch had been clicked in the back of his head; he was now a robot, the police force’s machine programed with all the answers, the laws, the by-the-book responses that were drilled in his mind years ago after straight weeks of non-stop studying every last bloody word in all his textbooks. It was a rude awakening to watch the sentences he painstakingly memorized being trampled every passing day by the hypocrites who wrote them.
“Ma’am, what in the world were you thinking?” Victor queried, taking the approach of a baffled yet un-amused officer, hiding the hatred lying just under his skin, threatening to grab his hand, if only to wring her throat for a paltry moment so she might see for a brief moment in her self-centered life that the world did not revolve around her.
“I just… officer, you gotta understand, I was… I was running late for-“
                “For what, ma’am? What was so bloody important that you decided this boy’s life was well beyond your concern?”
“Well, I… I just thought he was resting is all. Figured if I rolled up close enough to him-”
                “Please, ma’am, just stop. I’ll need you to talk with the head of my department when he comes ‘round to take care of things here.”
“Surely you can’t be serious!” The appalled look on her face made Victor want to vomit with disgust. “I simply must be on my way, sir, I-”
“Ma’am, please make this easier on yourself. If that boy bleeding out on the street needs to wait, you sure as hell do as well.”

The cop cars painted red and blue blotches across Victor’s face, mixing with the graying ones that came naturally. Radios squawked, sirens squealed, orders were barked with as much authority as could be mustered, but at this point there didn’t seem to be much point left to most. The boy was going to die, that much seem to be clear to the majority. The pricks, unable to give a moment’s hard work if only to save a life. Victor’s head hung low, embarrassed to be a part of this rag-tag rabble, nothing more than children playing at dress up and seeing how much candy they can get from the world.
                Chief Suttmann was at his finest, leaning against the woman’s car provocatively as he questioned her of what had happened, where she lived, if she was single, if they could have a follow-up discussion of the evening at her quarters, etc. etc. This was what Victor had come to expect. It saddened him deeply, beyond explanation, that this could possibly be the norm, the commonplace shit he would have to trudge through in his sneakers day after day.
                Meanwhile, the perpetrator was yelling up and down the street like a bloody banshee that was having its limbs removed one by one. “It was only a joke!!!” he would cry, “I only meant to scare him!!!” he would plead. He would try to justify that he knew the kid from school, they were supposed friends; he was just “roughing him up” as the idiot put it. The sorrowful shouts of a guilty conscious; Victor had heard them too many times to count, most often in his sleep.
                Slowly, Victor moved to the back of the ambulance, where they were loading the boy like you would a tire, roughly shoving it in before it could try and roll off the edge. As the medics moved away, Victor approached, like a shy kitten slowly sidling up to the first playmate it had ever met, unsure of what to do, how to react, or the courtesies involved.
                Victor took a damn good look, forcing every last aspect of this child into his mind. From his short brown hair, barely broaching his forehead, sad curls flopped against his head, to his rotund ears, fans poking out of the sides of his head, certain to keep the heat away from any summer’s day. His teeth looked rather pearly beneath the running ruby red that flowed from his face. Cuts were pocked all across his cheeks, sending Christmas ribbons sweeping over his pale skin, a sopping wet sheet of paper. His clothes were tattered, but not from the incident; this boy had probably never seen a set of clothes all his own in his entire life. His ragged hands were accentuated by gleaming nails, freshly cut, as if straight from a pedicure commercial. A pair of sturdy legs stuck from his underneath his skinny torso, two toothpicks jammed in a carrot. Victor moved his hand over the boy’s eyelids. He just wanted to see what was beneath, nothing more-
                He leaped back, a sudden chill running down his back. Those piercing blue eyes… The saw right through him, looked into his soul, and shot through his past, all the way back to… February twenty third. He could see the ice in his eyes as his brain froze over, never to show life again. He dropped to his knees out of sheer disbelief that he had let this happen again, slammed his fists against the ground out of complete frustration. He let burst a scream of agony, one that he had held back for much too long. All the hatred for his unfulfilled hope, all the pain caused by such putrid people, all the sadness these sorry souls had to endure… It was just too much now, much too much to bare.
                A crowd of medics came rushing over to see what was the matter, only to look on awkwardly as Victor cried to himself, curled in a ball of helplessness; for once he could see the absurdity in trying to help this lost cause any longer. The Chief rushed over, a look of bewilderment and shiftiness stretched across his face. He looked about him uncertainly as he bent over to whisper in Victor’s ear. “Cummon, officer, get up off yer ass! I’ve got a date-umm-I-mean-interview to go to in five minutes, and I’m sure as hell not leaving you in charge if yer sobbing behind some goddamned ambulance!”
                Victor rose to his feet slowly, straightened his uniform, rubbed the tears from his eyes, and looked square in the Chief’s face. “You won’t have to, Soot-Hands.” Tossing his badge on the ground, Victor turned on one heel and walked away from it all. His ears were deaf to the shouts of outrage crashing about the air behind him, blind to the stunned onlookers as he unlocked the shackles from himself, freed this aging body from the hurt he could bear no longer.
                “Don’t think yer getting this back if yah come in tomorrow, no sir!” Suttmann barked to no one in particular, mostly for his own benefit.
                Victor wondered just how long he could bear simply lying in bed for hours on end. He imagined it, a half-smile slowly creeping up his cheek.


William Milton found himself dazed slumped in front of his desk as he stared at pile upon disheartening pile of supposedly “important” papers. He often discovered himself like this when he left his mind for a brief romp in his thoughts of disconnection. Lack of sleep tended to act like a portal, bringing him to a completely new world, a Narnia all his own, except he was the only resident and it looked a damn lot like the shithole he came from. He didn’t find the frequency of these visits to his other realm terribly surprising though; insomnia, he found, had that effect on people.
                He had seen many of a case of this disorder while working at Saint Peter’s Hospital; when working from eight in the morning until ten at night with only a ten minute lunch break, one has the chance to see many different patients. One also gets the chance to pick up many of these ailments; William could list off the coworkers who had bitten the dust from working in this pit if he used both his fingers and toes. He had feared that he was next for the longest time, yet more and more of his acquaintances perished while he simply festered in the dark corner of the hospital, if it could honestly be called that. A cemetery was more like it. Saint Peter’s housed more corpses than it did patients on a daily basis; William had to wonder what sick sort of necromancy Peter must have been a saint of.
The doctor wasn’t anything that could be considered a religious man, but rather a self-proclaimed apathetic. That is to say, he didn’t mind if there was a god out there watching over him, but he didn’t have the drive or any real motivation to find out one way or another, nor did he care. What did it matter if there is or isn’t some powerful deity watching over us? We don’t know until we’re dead, nor will we be affected by it, so why care until our deaths come?
                Come… come to think of it, when was that last time someone came into my office? William had to ponder in his distant outlandish mind that circled about his body like a UFO searching for the perfect test subject. For his mind clearly had no intention of settling on one topic, but rather bounce from idea to concept to absurd fantasy to his day ended, or rather began as he would make his slow journey back home only to sit in his armchair for hours on end and do the exact same thing until his alarm informed him that it was time to return for another hard day of pondering.
                Some might say this would be a lonely life, but William didn’t see it that way, nor did he mind if it was. So many people had disappeared from the life presented to him that he figured that this was just the way of the world and you never truly had anyone else but yourself. He would sometimes create a second persona to talk to, his two selves conversing for hours on end until they eventually became the same person in a natural connection of like-minded individuals. His mind process, over time, became so fluid that he would create his own lives to watch and take part in as he saw fit, a personal cinema flashing behind his eyes, except occasionally members of the audience were asked to take part in the film. William figured this was the result of months of practice in simply thinking for hours and hours on end, strengthening his mind’s eye until it was the only thing that stared out from his head, his eyes permanently glazed with a mindless apathy that harkened back to the sightless opals of the blind.
                Blind to the chaos occurring outside, William continued exploring his formless world for the answers to questions that had already faded. It was only when Henry Greenhill crashed into his office like a tiger through a bedroom that William became aware of the sirens howling outside the walls of his asylum. Like removing a pair of headphones, William pulled himself together to allow himself to begin forming coherent sentences aloud. He would have to if this kid was ever going to shut up.
                “William, what in God’s name do you think you’re doing? Can you not hear the sirens outside??? We have to get going if this boy is gonna survive, let me tell you, he looks pretty messed up, and I dunno how much longer he’s gonna stick around with us living folks unless we get our asses in gear! Now, pull yourself together quick-like, and let’s get a move on! The kid’s got some serious internal bleeding, I’m surprised he’s made it as far as the hospital and- OMIGOD, William!!! Do you even care that this boy’s gonna die??? He’s barely sixteen for Christ’s sake, have some compassion man!!! Or better yet, do your damn job, you lazy shit! How- DARE –you ignore the silent pleas of a dying patient, let alone a child! And in such bad condition too… How are we going to save his life? Do we even have a-”
                “We don’t know until we try, now do we?” William asked nonchalantly, rising slowly from his chair like a vampire from its coffin, stretching his cold, pale limbs before reaching for his white coat that lied behind him, a dead skin that would slink into now and again to play the part of dutiful doctor.
                “How can you be so calm?!?” Henry asked incredulously, a naïve look of terror and frustration painted across his face like a grotesque clown mask. William found this amusing, but kept his thoughts to himself; he figured it would do him no good if he enraged this yappy intern any further. So, he instead responded by saying, “You call this calm?”
                Henry was taken a little aback by this, not suspecting that a question would be thrown back at him. He chewed on this for a few moments, like a dog gnawing on its bone to see if there’s be anything worthwhile inside, perhaps a few scraps caught in the cracks. And, suddenly, a look of realization and disgust grew from his eyes, a thorny vine that spread swiftly to the rest of his face, pain etched into his cheeks and mouth with each little prick. He then looked up, and, lashing out with those violent tendrils, he said, “No. That’s not calm. Its listlessness. A level of disregard and insensibility so fierce that nothing bothers you anymore, does it? You just don’t fucking care.”
                William was undeterred by this, rather familiar with this sort of response; he had to, or else be given a reason to care. And he didn’t need that. He had built up such a suit of armor around him over time, a mighty shield that encased him with an apathy so strong that nothing could pierce such a tenacious metal. He didn’t want it be destroyed with a simple statement, one that could be tossed about just as carelessly as himself. Instead of bothering responding, he pushed past the jumpy man, who remained rooted firmly in his place, his stare seemingly determined to spray venom on him as he walked on, unfascinated, uncaring. But he figured he needed to do something, or else why have this goddamned job in the first place?
                … Yes, why have this job at all? This was a thought that had crossed William’s mind many a time. And yet, despite his persistent strikes at the base of the matter, it had yet to topple over and reveal the answer hidden underneath. But he knew, deep down in his chest, that there was a reason, a reason that he needed to discover. Perhaps this was why he made his way to the entrance of the hospital, past the dull faces he saw day after day yet never bothered to match up with names or personalities or wants or needs or cares or loves or hates or lives. He just piled them all up in his mind, one on top of the other, in a huge bin that he labeled “The Dead Who Cannot Rest”; he found it easier for him this way. A lot less strain or time was necessary for such an approach.
                As he approached the doors that led outside, he heard a squeaky call from behind him. “Oh no you don’t!” Henry scrambled at the speed of a cheetah just learning how to use its legs, fast but moving at a stumbling gait. A long screech filled the room as his shoes skidded to a halt in front of William, who hadn’t bothered moving anymore, knowing that it would be so much easier just to deal with him now than allow the one-sided chase to go on any further.
                “You think you can just walk out and leave this boy to rot? Oh no mister, I don’t think so!! You may not care about the life of another, but I sure as hell do!!! Now cummon!!!” Grabbing a handful of William’s pristine uniform

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